*Not an official critique, but...* I really like it, overall. But, I do have two issues... One, the neck seems to be a bit long to me... I'm no expert at anatomy, and maybe it was intentional, but the neck just seems too long to me. And, I'm just not a fan of when the eyes are drawn over the hair. it just bothers me. But, I love the shading and highlighting! Especially in the hair. Along with the overall sketchiness of it with the almost pastel-ness of the colors. It reminds me of memories. And good job at making all the strokes go the same way! That has always been hard for me ^^' Also, if that is in real colored pencil, how did you get it on the computer so cleanly? Scanners are butts to me, but maybe I've only used bad ones?